First time, first drabble.
This is exciting!
His eyes darted around, his breathing suddenly became heavy; why wouldn't he? He’s surrounded by merciless bandits.
Yelling for help was never an option, even if it did, who would come to rescue him in this abandoned desert? Elliot cursed the day he decided to test his might and challenge the Great Desert; ironically, his daring actions brought him regret and self-pity.
As the bandits close by, Elliot takes a final stand and attempts to run for it. Needless to say, his fate was sealed, and if fate had a human tongue, it would speak to not look at it.
It's worth noting that I can only speak, read and communicate in English.
But hey, language barriers are no longer an issue, Google Translate is our ally!
- Pro vkládání komentářů se musíte přihlásit
I wonder whether our drabbles
Maladi
I wonder whether our drabbles are readable after you have put them through Google Translator. :)
Anyway, nice to have you here with us.
You made me to try it!
Danae
I admire the correlation
Scully
I admire the correlation between the headline and the content of the drabble. Nicely done. :)
Through google translator?
Tenny
Through google translator? You are really brave...
Your drabble is great. :) I love that he is deserted in desert, talk about irony.
Good to have a native speaker
Blanca
Good to have a native speaker on board :)
That's a great first drabble!
Danae
Good atmosphere.
Ebženka
Wow, I must admit you´ve
Lee
Wow, I must admit you´ve built some great atmosphere in this one. And it´s your first! Congratulation! I am here a bit late but still: Welcome on board! :)